special effects
the video's effects could of been a lot better, the teleporting could of used some work that will make it more realistic and the flame was a bit weak, biut overall the lightning one is the weakest one that needs the most work done on it since it does not love up to what it was meant to be. the over flame and teleport effects where still good in terms of how they where done
audio
for the audio i could of really edited it a little so the quite things where louder and the loud things where quieter( E.G jays ringtone was to loud and jays mum's voice was to quiet at times) the video is also lacking a BGM which it could really do with but the story moves so quickly its hard to find a place where it could go and what song would work
sequence
the sequence was put together really well, its a little jumpy how ever, but that can easily be fixed
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